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My set of orphan triplets take a nap on the deck. They are so cute... they are (Left to Right ) P.J. ( stripes ) Charcol ( Grey ) and (Orange ) Caprica

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:icontvd-photography:
I really enjoy this photo. I love how all 3 cats are looking at the camera and seem to be posing for you, I like their expressions and wonder what they are thinking as they stare at you.
I think you will be able to give more impact to this photo by cropping a little, not too much but enough to put a bit more focus on the cats, get them centered a little more. I do however like the decking as it's not distracting at all but it is a shame about the mat to the right of the photo. I know there is not a lot you can do unless you would like to try and clone it out.
Another suggestion I would like to make is the angle. I think if you could get down lower at eye level it would also give more impact.
Other than those suggestions I think this is a lovely photo and a definite fave for me. Keep it up :)
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:iconxxtwilightdreamzxx:
your orange kitty is bright in color and they are all kawaii (cute)

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:icontvd-photography:
Haha so cute. I think it wouldn't hurt to crop a little so the kittens are more centered :nod:

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Yeah, I thought about that. Make them stand out more. But they were so cute I just wanted to get them posted.

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:icontvd-photography:
No worries, you can leave it as is that way when I get home I can write a critique on it ;)
I finally found something I can critique you on and all my watchers will see it :)

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This is a lovely composition. I agree with TVD-Photography, however, in that a bit of cropping wouldn't hurt. Other than that, nice shot! :)

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I love this photo - the cats are so pretty with their different colours - I would crop it right down to get rid of most of the decking to see how it looks - it is lovely as it stands though x

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What a great photo

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Very cute!! Nice photo, but I agree with TVD-Photography as well. The contrast between each of their colours is very nice though, and I like the pose. Good work! :)
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They look like they giving the uber evals....LOL

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Jun 15, 2009, 6:03:43 PM

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